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Old 08-19-2005, 10:59 AM www.Articles4you.net
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Hi,

what do you thinking about my first english page?

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Old 08-21-2005, 11:31 PM
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good, very good... for the content part, but change the background, it doesn't give a great look, our eye is first attracted by the bg then we see the content box. Other then that, maybe some CSS would be great
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Old 08-22-2005, 11:37 AM
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if you were to replace the background image with a soft, solid color, then the visitor's attention would not be distracted from the main content.

also... what's the purpose of showing the stats button in the lower left corner?
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Old 08-22-2005, 12:25 PM
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It's not really obvious to me what the site is about. I also agree with other people's comments about the distractingness of the background. Also the Google ads swamp the content. Also would-be-links which don't do anything drive me crazy. Also I am puzzled that one of the articles is in German. Finally, 'Online bachelor degree enlightenment online bachelor degree program and online bachelor degree education dedicated to your success' looks like a clumsy attempt at keyword-stuffing and doesn't read as an English sentence at all.
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Old 08-22-2005, 01:30 PM
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Really good but I do agree with everyone else about the background also I would just like to say the page is filled well not completley but it has a few ads. Good though
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Old 08-23-2005, 03:22 PM
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I like it, very fast loading, I clicked and bam it was there. I agree about the background very off putting.
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Old 08-24-2005, 12:18 AM
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As everyone says, the background needs real improvement. Everything else is fine.
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Old 08-24-2005, 10:29 AM
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I, too, find the background a little overwhelming. Also, I don't understand the orange "dead links" on the left side of the content area. Also, too many ads... it's not good to have more ads than content. Overal, it's pretty good.

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good, very good... for the content part, but change the background, it doesn't give a great look, our eye is first attracted by the bg then we see the content box. Other then that, maybe some CSS would be great
I agree, I would change the background.
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Old 08-25-2005, 06:47 PM
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I agree with everyone else about changing the background. Too distracting. Other than that it's good.
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Old 08-25-2005, 07:01 PM
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The orange text is not visible, I presume that this dead links will be activated eventually. Until that, remove or hide them.

Also, the Google ads and the ones on the top are taking a lot of space and are not well organized.

The articles are not titled, no date/time, you may need to add a search engine.
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Old 08-25-2005, 07:42 PM
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a little frightened by the exploding background but the content looks pretty good. The layout is even clear enough. Just keep working at it. Websites are always a work in progress.
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