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The Tom And Jerry Story
Old 08-28-2006, 01:05 PM The Tom And Jerry Story
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Old 08-28-2006, 02:23 PM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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I think the content is good to begin with - however you need to concentrate more on the design: format the text, work on the layout, maybe have an option to view larger versions of the images etc. But its a good start
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Old 08-28-2006, 05:12 PM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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i am viewing it in opera, 800x600.
the site overlows a little. and there are almost no margins.
white text on black background is difficult to read especially if there is a lot of textual content.
images are well optimised
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Old 08-28-2006, 08:36 PM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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I loved Tom and Jerry as a kid!

I think your site really lacks any design at all. It is just one long string of text.

I am also never a fan of a black background.
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Old 08-29-2006, 08:09 AM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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Old 08-29-2006, 08:40 AM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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I'm also a big fan of Tom & Jerry since I was a kid. They are really cute and fun to watch.

As for your site, it seems that you need to format your text and font style. The background also doesn't seem to match the theme of the site. Choose a different color... a more lively one will do!


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Old 08-29-2006, 11:03 AM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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Another old-time Tom and Jerry fan here -- who can't be ?? LOL.

In the true spirit of Tom and Jerry, you need a design that echo's the characters. You need some color, something more fun and playful than the somber black, but, of course, not too childish (although Tom and Jerry speaks to the child in all of us).

The colors in the banner are great..I'd start there.. something that complements and contrasts with it. Then I'd work on the presentation of the text.

Great idea... just needs some oomph
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Old 08-29-2006, 11:55 AM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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Old 08-29-2006, 02:28 PM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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I am agreeing with the previous posts. The black background and white font is very hard on the eyes. The images are good, but should have the option to view them larger. Break up the text a bit and change the colors. Great content though and the story is engaging. Keep trying!
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Old 09-01-2006, 11:02 AM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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the design is not suitable, on the other hand, content is OK.
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Old 09-01-2006, 11:35 AM Re: The Tom And Jerry Story
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i closed the "tom and jerry" site! because, i must study my lesson. i think, my lesson more important than the tom and jerry site right now. i'll open the site on summer.

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