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Old 09-05-2006, 11:42 PM some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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if you could give me your feed back on my sites that i have been working on and please tell me like it is

http://www.terroralerts.us/
http://www.dragonsforevertattooing.com/
http://www.urNFL.com/ <~~~not yet online should have it on line by 9/11/2006
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Old 09-06-2006, 04:48 AM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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Terror alerts
Site is obviously made for adsense. Information is badly structured and name listings are totaly unreadable, though the appearance is rather accurate. Google AdSearch in the bottom breaks in firefox.

Dragon Tattoos
Design seems like stolen from GTA Series, at least fonts are VERY similar. Images in portfolio should have previews instead of loading 150K into 60x60 cell.
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Old 09-06-2006, 06:37 AM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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Sorry but I don't like the designs, seems some are designed for adsense and everythings just big.
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Old 09-06-2006, 06:55 PM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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thank you for the input put it down thats ok but if you do please let me know what i sould do with it at the same time if you dont like it tell me but dont leave it as that let me know what could help it out im new at this ive only been doing this for 3 mounths now so yeah im not going to be that good at it and with no help this is as far as i have got with it
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Old 09-07-2006, 01:52 AM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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My suggestions:

For terroralerts.us, I think the main content area is too messy, and everything is just bunched together. Using more whitespace would help. I like the header image you have but it's too pixelated and fuzzy, and that makes it look like a lower quality graphic.

For dragonsforevertattooing.com, you have everthing in capitol letters, they're hard to read and distracting. I do not think you need such a huge space for the shoutbox, actually I don't even think it is of much use. You could have just the welcoming message and the news on the homepage. Remove the gallery section, have it as a seperate page and list it in the navigation bar. Put more space between each news item, perhaps add a little summary under each title?
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Old 09-12-2006, 12:13 PM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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thank you crong for the input i will take your suggestions on the dragons site i will take the caps off as for the gallery were its at i wanted it there for others that come to me for work thay can log on fast and pick out of the flash art so that way when they get to my shop i would have it all set up for them i also do tattoo besites this this is just something i want to get more in to and as time goes on i know my sites will get better
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Old 09-12-2006, 09:14 PM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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Maybe you could consider putting the gallery section in a different position then? It just looks very awkward right now.
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Old 09-12-2006, 10:38 PM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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I think being that tatoo is a form of art that you should have some of your best pieces on the first page. That might someone say WOW let me see what else he can do. As far as tattoo news, I dont find it nearly as interesting as the actual designs. I also think that the font you used in the menu is not meant to be that small. In our logo it looks fine, but when it is sized down, "about us" looks like AOOUG US. Maybe it just needs to be saved as a higher quality file, that may help. Your guestbook also seems like one i have used in the past, careful because one problem i ran into was spam, in no time your guestbook will be filled w/ viagra ads and cigular wireless plugs.
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Old 09-13-2006, 12:37 AM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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thank you for the input i will see what i can do to make the font more readable to others i realy dont want to go with a differnt font cuz i like that it looks like ink driping but if its not readable then ill have to do some thing ill try to higher the quality on that thank you

urNFL.com is on line now not done with by far any input on that one
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Old 09-13-2006, 11:42 PM Re: some websites ive been working on any input would be cool
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i have visited the first site.
the dark color of google ads makes that difficult to read
site looks attractive and informative.
google search box is overlapping the right side column on 800x600 screen
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