Website Review and Suggestions

**70w** · 09-29-2006, 05:24 AM

so i'm trying to make a website allmost 4 days ago....lol...
i know this is really not mutch but you must start from somewhere.
i'm just trying that adsense thing but dont know really what to do.or how.

please tell me what i need to make with this site.
because i think something is wrong.

oh and if this is not enough, my english is really bad.

www.uwcollection.tk

thanx

**kreoton** · 09-29-2006, 07:22 AM

nice trick with secret page

but nothing useful on your site sorry.

**camp185** · 09-29-2006, 02:14 PM

Um...I don't get. What is your site about? If this is your first I would get rid of the ads for now. You will have hard enough time gettng visitors to come back.

**adsenser** · 09-29-2006, 02:18 PM

nice starting ... way to go

**itscooper** · 09-29-2006, 03:02 PM

Hi,

It's difficult to give any advise on design when the site has no obvious point. Don't get me wrong, I'm not critisising you; as you said, 'you must start from somewhere'. I just mean that it makes commenting difficult because I'm not sure what you're aiming for exactly.

However, there is one thing I would change for definate. The green 'Next Page' button at the bottom looks out of place because if it's colour. I would suggest trying a red button (like you have above) or a blue one. This will keep the colour scheme more coherent.

Cheers. I hope your site goes well.

**smartcoyote** · 09-30-2006, 04:29 AM

You should not use 'the best' for the description of your website, and you should use a good logo.

**crush123** · 09-30-2006, 02:21 PM

use a different color for the name of the sites in the buttons.
use some top banner. now only the "W" is visible.
at the top left some message is going upwards. i think it is difficult to read
have some description of sites you are linking to

**70w** · 10-02-2006, 12:17 PM

Thanx and thanx again for your reviews.its mutch better results what i thinkt first.
i know my site it's a "0" but i wanna make it better or make a new site anyway you guys giwe me the start point.
sorry for my bad english.

**cpsitesaver.com** · 10-02-2006, 01:31 PM

You have a heart to go on and improve. That's the good news about your site having you as the owner.

Remember that every webmaster starts from scratch. No one is born knowing HTML and all these webhosting stuff. Take the critiques and move on to improve. Have a purpose on what you are doing online and aim high on it.

Good luck!

**70w** · 03-09-2009, 06:24 AM

WHOA what an old thread!
09-29-2006 few years ...

that was my "first one" and thanx for those replies i continued creating websites!
here is 2 of them tell me what u think friends.

website1

website2

there is more but most of them are adult related ....