Posts: 91
Location: Wiltshire, United Kingdom
|
Its a nice design - however I can't really give you credit if you edited a template...
Anyway - the look of the pages is very good. I can only suggest
minour changes to perfect this design:
Firstly, if your company has a logo - i would suggest that you use it in the top of the webpage rather than using plain text. If you would prefer to keep the title as plain text, I think that you should change the text: "Stop loosing sales to your competition". Verdana looks bad if you make it too big - mabe a smaller font size or perhaps a different sans serif font alltogether...
Secondly, as I said before, Verdana looks bad if you make it too big - this also applies to the text: "Sign up today and receive 1 week free! For a limited time only." Here I think that changing the font is the only way of solving this problem because by reducing the font size you also reduce its impact on viewers.
Apart from that the website looks great, you have done a good job of editing the template.
9/10 - the highest rating that I have given so far (as of 28/1/04)
|
No biggie though.
