Website Review and Suggestions

**tucsonsam** · 02-05-2004, 12:00 PM

I've reviewed my three sites, and had fun doing it. I'll definitely be back.

But now it's my turn!

Sammy's National Body Challenge Experience

This page is awful! I was in a hurry to get it up, and it needs drastic revision. Trouble is, now that it's there, it's hard to see it differently.

So that you know I can do better than this, I invite you to take a look at some of my other pages, but this is the one I need help with.

**Montero** · 02-05-2004, 12:45 PM

yea, you do need help with this

**tucsonsam** · 02-05-2004, 01:22 PM

Why thank you Jetta-GT-

I guess the message is I should just go ahead and redo it. If so, you're right. Since posting this request, I can see all kinds of things I should do with it.

**tucsonsam** · 02-05-2004, 01:43 PM

I've made a couple of changes that needed doing to this site, and would still like a review.

**alansmith** · 02-05-2004, 04:23 PM

What did you di it in? Frontpage lol.

I thing the best thing to do is start with a clean piece of paper. Download a templace and add the content, do something to get rid of all of that pink.

**tucsonsam** · 02-05-2004, 05:08 PM

You are right, Alan. Now that I've cleaned up the first page some, I can see where the pink is too much. I did not use Front Page, I used my own head and fingers, in TextPad, will not download a template, but will try to design it better.

I really appreciate the suggestions. They have helped me see the page with a more critical eye.