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Old 11-04-2006, 04:23 PM Charity website
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Please review this site I just finished. I need some constructive criticism before I present the final product to my client. It is a local charity organisation.
They don’t care much about interactivity, so please, only design and layout suggestions.
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Old 11-04-2006, 06:08 PM Re: Charity website
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like it a lot. looks simple and easy
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Old 11-04-2006, 06:16 PM Re: Charity website
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Nice and simple, the layout is good, nice work.

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Old 11-04-2006, 10:30 PM Re: Charity website
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Looks nice and clean...
I really like the mirror effect on your navigation. . .

Will your client be okay with the firefox logo being so dominant?

Other than that, I am not seeing anything that really needs change...
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Old 11-04-2006, 10:42 PM Re: Charity website
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I like the website, but

make the links on top more visible.

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Old 11-05-2006, 09:06 AM Re: Charity website
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Looks nice and clean...
I really like the mirror effect on your navigation. . .

Will your client be okay with the firefox logo being so dominant?

Other than that, I am not seeing anything that really needs change...
I'll exchange the FF logo for a gray one. I've put it there to please my girlfriend. She likes strong colours. Thanks for pointing it out.
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Old 11-05-2006, 11:33 AM Re: Charity website
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You have a typo in the third paragraph "Thiswe achieve by" should be "This we achieve by".

The page passes W3c validation. Great job!
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Old 11-05-2006, 09:33 PM Re: Charity website
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I've made some changes after heavy criticism from another forum. No more icons, faster background image download, beautiful new home-made Google search button and larger fonts in the nav bar.
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Old 11-06-2006, 06:55 AM Re: Charity website
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I would make the logo brighter and sharper. Not sure I understand the symbolism used on the "I" but do think it should stand out more.
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Old 11-06-2006, 08:14 AM Re: Charity website
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I would make the logo brighter and sharper. Not sure I understand the symbolism used on the "I" but do think it should stand out more.
The "i" stands for IRIS. Since iris is a round shape or a part of the eye, I made it look like there is a symbolic eye within the letter "i". The charity also watches over the needy, so i thoght it was a good idea to do it that way.
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Old 11-06-2006, 08:19 AM Re: Charity website
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really easy layout. fine the way it is.
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Old 11-06-2006, 08:45 AM Re: Charity website
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Ah, OK - didn't see it. Overall it's a very nice clean site.
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Old 11-07-2006, 04:22 PM Re: Charity website
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Would, please, an experienced web designer review this site? Everyone here seem to like it but I've got some heavy criticism from another forum by people who know what they are talking about.

I mean no disrespect to borzoid and others that reviewed the site and gave me their opinions. I value them all.
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Old 11-07-2006, 07:06 PM Re: Charity website
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First of all, I just want to state that I feel the site, as is, gets the job done. But, since you would like some criticism, here I go. Keep in mind these are just my opinions. The images that you have on the right side, tacky. The site looks so clean untill you notice the right side. Other then some spelling and grammatical errors, the site is fine.
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