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Old 11-14-2006, 02:32 PM Search Engine Optimization Site Review
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I just built this site yesterday and I already have a number of hits. Please give my your opinion.

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Old 11-14-2006, 02:47 PM Re: Search Engine Optimization Site Review
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The site is irritating my eyes. Other than that it is ok
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Old 11-14-2006, 07:27 PM Re: Search Engine Optimization Site Review
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The site is irritating my eyes. Other than that it is ok
What is irritating about it?
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Old 11-14-2006, 07:33 PM Re: Search Engine Optimization Site Review
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The site is irritating my eyes. Other than that it is ok
Is it the panther?
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Old 11-14-2006, 09:28 PM Re: Search Engine Optimization Site Review
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Please delete the animated $ now. It looks amateuristic and annoys the hell outta me. Then the panther image is used on about 1.540.289 other websites, so you might wanna drop that as well.

Furthermore your URL looks not very thrustworthy, there's no 'about' section and a yahoo.com email address. Then the bar on top about that Ad whatever looks bad as well.

My suggestion is to start over, because this website looks errr... not very good.

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NOW I see it! That URL is an affiliate link. Yuch, that sucks.
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Old 11-14-2006, 10:06 PM Re: Search Engine Optimization Site Review
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Please delete the animated $ now. It looks amateuristic and annoys the hell outta me. Then the panther image is used on about 1.540.289 other websites, so you might wanna drop that as well.
I may change the $ sign but not the panther. Many people have given me positive feedback on how well the picture flashes with the music. I have had to explain that I did not design it. I just put it together. In addition, what did you do, just stay at the top of the website? As you scroll down the $ sign disappears. So, I am not getting your response. You can only become annoyed if you just sit there and stare at it.

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Furthermore your URL looks not very thrustworthy, there's no 'about' section and a yahoo.com email address. Then the bar on top about that Ad whatever looks bad as well.
The URL is an Ad Tracker Address which should be used by anyone marketing online to track their marking efforts. It is not an affiliate link. I will add my accomplishments. I didn't want to over crowd the website. But if a number of people think that I should I will. It is not a problem. As for the bar on top, I missed that. That is the best tip you gave.

As for the email address, that is something small. But we teach people how to market online while spending as little money as possisble. The website itself was built using www.freewebs.com. Therefore, I am not sure where you see an affiliate address. This company teaches people how to save money using free tools. So, a free email address is only fitting.

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My suggestion is to start over, because this website looks errr... not very good.
Your comments are very negative. You are not inspiring at all. I am glad I am not in your downline for a business. I will try to take your comments positively because I have learnt more with this company then any other training company out there. In addition, though I am very successful with offline marketing. I am very proud of myself. I believe that I've done a great job for this to be my first website. I have already made two platinum sales within this twenty four period from it. I just published the site yesterday.


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NOW I see it! That URL is an affiliate link. Yuch, that sucks.
You couldn't be more off... your comments suck....YUCK! There are certain ways to say anything.

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