First off, I think your design concept is great. My son owns a tattoo business and I do see the need for the "in your face" colors that you have ~ love that!
What I would change since you changed your first page to a 'welcome' page (before going to the actual main page), is to add an "Enter Here" (or some such wording) button in place of the "Home" button. I like this "enter" page ~ it just needs some clarification in the navigation area.
Then on the second page that the "home" button takes you to, there is no need for the home button there.
Some changes I would make to your wording ~
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Tattoos are a very old form of body art and have been practiced from a very long time in civilized human history. The history of tattoos is very ancient and seems to be of thousands of years old and even before the birth of Christ. The recorded indication of tattoos comes from the ancient Egypt where wall paintings as old as 2000 BC have been suggesting the use of tattoos in the ancient Egyptian society.
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Tattoos are a very old form of body art and have been practiced for centuries in civilized human history. The history of tattoos is very ancient and is documented to before the birth of Christ. The recorded documentation of tattoos comes from (<--deleted 'the') ancient Egypt where wall paintings as old as 2000 BC have suggested the use of tattoos in (<--deleted 'the')ancient Egyptian society.
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The etymology of word tattoo provides few very different and interesting answers to the current day practicing of making permanent colored marks on human body or tattooing. The word “tattoo” can have many origins as words in many different languages have the same meaning and similar pronunciation. Different civilizations have been recorded to use the word tattoo or at least practicing of coloring their body parts for different reasons have been recorded.
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Etymology (the study of the origins of words) of the word "tattoo " provides very different and interesting answers to the current day practic e of making permanent , colored marks on the human body , or tattooing. The word “tattoo” can have several origins since words in many different languages have the same meaning and similar pronunciation.
Different civilizations have been recorded to use the word tattoo , or engage in the practic e of coloring their body parts to beautify the body, and for religious or tribal reasons, just to name a few.
All-in-all I really enjoyed your site and hope these suggestions will be helpful.
Best,
Jules
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