Website Review and Suggestions

**raven67854** · 11-25-2006, 10:33 PM

my site is somewhat new some of the pages need some work. but i have a decent ad company's zango and google adsense and revenues cpm(HIGHLY RECEMMENED). but please review my website please and tell me what u think.
www.freeclipsandgames.com

**blackhawkpowers** · 11-25-2006, 10:58 PM

To many ads...... There are far to many ads on your site at first glance.

Navigation.... there is none really the links are midway down the site

content.... again none really you need to have something welcoming users to your site. Tell people why they should be there why do you want them to come to your site.

Logo is alright I like the design but it looks stretched you should save it at a higher quality or remake it completely but the design is nice.

You really should look into some CSS as well for your site.

**raven67854** · 11-26-2006, 01:49 AM

yes i know this that is why iam working on it the ads are being takin down my new sponor just approved revenuecpm.com is my new sponsor so shortly all the ads will be taken down. as for the photo iam working on it and thank you for your reply.

**GokchanTurkey** · 11-26-2006, 07:38 AM

to many ads this site

template is bad

**aldor** · 11-26-2006, 10:53 AM

Hi
Yes I agree with Blackhawkpowers about your logo, but from your later post it would seem you are working to sharpen it up.
To me scrolling text is just annoying, did you put it in just because you could. I would suggest that you let the text scroll into place then stay put, that's much less a distraction.
A short paragraph outling the aims of your site wouldn'nt go amiss.
I would agree with a previous post that if you are serious about developing your site you ought to be looking at CSS, it is much easier to change things around and gives you more control than HTML by itself.
All the best,
Alan.

**barengo** · 11-26-2006, 11:27 AM

The site is like a newbie, but if your making business, thats nice!!

One question: people is getting to your site from search engines?

**raise** · 11-26-2006, 12:18 PM

Looks to me as if you are still working on it. Not a bad idea for content, but it all needs aligning.

**raven67854** · 11-27-2006, 10:28 PM

hey guys i took your advice what do you think now. i removed some of the ads and fixed some but not all of the pages. i also removed all of the link exchanges

www.freeclipsandgames.com

**myworksweb** · 11-28-2006, 12:20 AM

Plain and Simple...

Your Website is HORRIBLE!!!!!!!

I hope this HELPS!!!!!!

**aldor** · 11-28-2006, 03:14 PM

Hi
I have just had a look after your update and am pleased to say that it now looks much less cluttered and having everything aligned is much neater.
Kepp working at it, remember a web site is never finished it is always a work in progress.
All the best
Alan.

**amrendra_uno** · 11-29-2006, 03:30 AM

Hi

contents of your site are not arranged in proper way, colour combination is also not match to your work domain and in the home page there are 2 banners in the top that is not good.

Amar
www.orbitsofts.com

**choco122003** · 11-29-2006, 04:45 AM

The color of your site is Ok because your site is about games. But I think your link should be a picture or a preview of the game. So that people get attracted to view the links in your site.

**candid_kris** · 11-29-2006, 08:35 AM

You have a lot to do with your site. Visitors will not be encourage to go on. Put useful contents that will make you site more informative to your visitors in regards to what your offering.

**aksana** · 11-30-2006, 06:08 AM

It is almost empty in Mozilla Firefox

**blackhawkpowers** · 11-30-2006, 10:57 AM

much better without all the ads now.. I do think you need to devise some sort of layout to your site though instead of being straight down. The idea of putting a screen shot of a picture next to the link is probably a good idea so people know what kind of games you're offering. You could even probably stand to use some CSS or even just a basic table to organinze this on your screen. Some content would also be useful as your site seems to be almost blank now but lots of headway since the first time..

**raven67854** · 12-01-2006, 09:23 AM

thanks please check my site by monday i have some huge new improvments that aregoing to be made that will take me all weak to finish. but also all of my games will all be on one page instead of six.

**bigpete2k6** · 12-01-2006, 10:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by myworksweb

Plain and Simple...

Your Website is HORRIBLE!!!!!!!

I hope this HELPS!!!!!!

well put, but you obviously need some advice.

Are you competent in html and graphics or just a beginner?

even so the most basic of site design needs structure, which you appear to be lacking.

Rules of thumb, black sites needs white text, or vice versa, generally links should appear blue in appearance so that they are easy to distinguish.

You may want to consider using tables with alignment and widths if you are in-experienced with webdesign, or do a tableless css design if you know your stuff.

If you need any advice with this , just pm me

**nmallare** · 12-01-2006, 11:23 AM

Well, since some people cannot seem to respond in a civilized manner, I'll give it a go.

[1] The very first thing I noticed was the game links. All of them are incorrect, but I'll show you one and you can change the rest.

Code:

<a href="http://www.freeclipsandgames.com\games.htm/">Games</a>

Needs to look like this:

Code:

<a href="http://www.freeclipsandgames.com/games.htm">Games</a>

I only made two changes. The "\" after "...games.com" was changed to a "/", and the ending "/" was deleted.

[2] Looking through the site, it looks like all of your links have the above problem.

I know you're making changes that will be live Monday, so I'll check back then. Most of my other comments are about organization, but I'll wait and see what you put out there, before I say anything further.

Nick

**raven67854** · 12-04-2006, 09:42 AM

ok well i made my changes what do you guys think. i think its better eveything better. the site is easier to get to.

**nmallare** · 12-04-2006, 01:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by raven67854

ok well i made my changes what do you guys think. i think its better eveything better. the site is easier to get to.

Well done! You did a complete 360 on the orginization. I have to get going, but I'l make sure to check it out more in depth later.

Also, add this in your games table code:

Code:

style="border-color: #FFFFFF;"

ie - <table style="border-color: #FFFFFF;">

Nick