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Old 11-27-2006, 03:48 AM First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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Hi all;

This is my first attempt at building webpages so please be gentle... : ) I look forward to reading your comments.

http://www.dornessaharris.com

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Old 11-27-2006, 04:29 AM Re: First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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there is useful content on the site
but, viewing the site in opera,
some part of the right side content is missing.
consider to edit the html properly.
keyword tag is stuffed with many keywords.
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Old 11-27-2006, 07:00 PM Re: First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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there is useful content on the site
but, viewing the site in opera,
some part of the right side content is missing.
consider to edit the html properly.
keyword tag is stuffed with many keywords.

I don't know what you mean when you say that you are looking at it in opera? Please explain.
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Old 11-27-2006, 07:41 PM Re: First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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it looks pretty good.
The page is pretty long though.
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Old 11-27-2006, 07:57 PM Re: First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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I don't know what you mean when you say that you are looking at it in opera? Please explain.
"opera" is another webbrowser like internet explorer or firefox.
when you make a new website you should run it threw an html validator that will make sure you don't have any crazy issues with multi browser support.. a link to a free validator is http://validator.w3.org/ ..

it's not bad for your first site although I think before you really push this website and attempt to make it widely available you should go ahead and sign up with a hosting company the godaddy logo's on the site take away from it's credibility.... especially since you're advertising earn six figures you should be able to dish out the $5 a month for the hosting....

I think you need more navigation to some of this content I didn't actually read it but the quantity of text presented on the initial page is very intimidating you should make a couple of seperate pages and have a navigation menu. possibly also expand the white content area of your site all the way to the right the black blank area on the right just doesn't look right.

Lastly your copywrite is not centered. All things considered though not bad for your first site
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Old 11-28-2006, 02:16 AM Re: First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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I'll give 60/100 since this is your first site, you need to work a lot in this site to give it a pro look.
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Old 11-28-2006, 07:06 AM Re: First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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it looks good for a starter, maybe you could move a ad free free web hosting instead since the top banner spoils everything.

You take a look at this list and see those without forced ads: http://www.free-webhosts.com/webhosting-01.php
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Old 11-28-2006, 09:34 AM Re: First time webpage builder -- Please review my site
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Hi
Do you really need the audio background on a site that the visitor needs to read and understand, to me it is just irritating and a distraction.
I liked the overall design but would have increased the left and right margins to the main body of text under the heading "ALL ARE WELCOME".
I tried to find more information about "Predator" but the page I was directed to under tools toook so long to load using a dial up connection I gave up.
All the best
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