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Old 12-14-2006, 04:29 AM Please check out my site
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Hi I've only been doing this for about 6-8 months now. so i'm still rely new at web design. any help or suggestons would be great. my site is www.freeplayzone.com

let me know what you think even if it's now a good reveiw and if it's not a good review than offer some suggestons about how to fix it.

Thank you in advance.
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Old 12-14-2006, 10:59 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Your site is very plain only blue is what I mean by that.. you should come up with some sort of catchy banner for your site and when you rewrite your site you should look into CSS it's much cleaner and works better than your current setup
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Old 12-14-2006, 12:47 PM Re: Please check out my site
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Carl, I can see you spent alot of time on this. Maybe think about changing color to something other than blue, find a friend that wears glasses, thick. Let them review the site and give you input on best color choice for viewing. My choice is white background with black letters.
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Old 12-14-2006, 11:51 PM Re: Please check out my site
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There's nothing wrong with blue, but the color you're using is a bright aqua which is not easy on the eyes. Try a more neutral color, or something a little more subdued and your visitors will probably stay longer.
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Old 12-15-2006, 12:27 AM Re: Please check out my site
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the background color, the "play now" and "more info" buttons are very unprofessional IMO
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Old 12-15-2006, 02:40 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Well done. May be the background should be in white.
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Old 12-15-2006, 10:42 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Old 12-16-2006, 03:55 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Try a better layout. Yes, use CSS! It's a must for a good design.
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Old 12-16-2006, 10:01 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Design is like baby's design. Look around how other desing the site, then try something related but new.
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Old 12-16-2006, 04:36 PM Re: Please check out my site
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Very bright design, kinda confusing to me
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Old 12-17-2006, 07:32 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Could you please tell me what you mean by confusing. What is it that you find confusing.
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Old 01-03-2007, 04:37 PM Re: Please check out my site
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Hey everyone thamks for your suggestons and in put.

I have just done an update on my site using css styling please give me some more in put.

Thanks again
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Old 01-03-2007, 07:04 PM Re: Please check out my site
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Great content but the whole design just doesn't do it for me, it's very plain looking and if it's a site for games it needs to have a bit of funk you need a nice layout with a few graphics, logo to pull users in, this is a cool site for css inspiration http://www.csszengarden.com/ , congrats on your wee baby my son is born on the same day lol
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Old 01-04-2007, 09:16 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Website looks ok, but looks plain maybe change the font to a better one and add some pictures and graphics etc.


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Old 01-04-2007, 11:32 PM Re: Please check out my site
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I think the positioning of some of the things is a bit off. If you reposition some things, I think it could look much better. (For example, the main text in the centre).
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Old 01-18-2007, 11:15 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Just did another update this css styling is so cool and easy.

would have had it done before now but my wife and me just had a baby.

Please give me some more feed back.

I know that I still have to work on a better color sceme and I'm still working on the graphics that will be added later.

Thanks again fot every thing
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Old 01-18-2007, 05:33 PM Re: Please check out my site
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I used to and a lot of the times still do make the same exact mistakes you're making. And to fix it you only need th change three major things then you'll pretty much be there.
First off is that you're only using 700 something pixel width. Think about making the width 100%. The width will be different for different monitors and it would look more appealing if it were stretched out all the way.
Secondly, You should barely ever (unless you're using extremely light colors.. Even then you might not want to) Use a gradient for ever navigation link. I did that once, changed it and after that my reviews were 2 times better.
Last and definitely most important. Think about your colors. You can't just jump into it and say I'm going to use burgundy with gray. You need to spend a good few ours with a color wheel to see what colors work well with each other, and then change the shades from there on out until it looks pleasing to the viewer, and easy on the eyes. Look at other sites, and don't necessarily copy their design but see what looks good and apply that to designs later on.
As for content there isn't anything wrong. You have a very good amount of content and after you get a good website to pull a viewer in the first time they see your site your content will keep them coming back.
See www.miniclip.com for a good example of what you're doing.
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Old 01-18-2007, 07:01 PM Re: Please check out my site
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Thanks very much for your review Mattmaul1992 that was one of the best reviews that I have ever recieved.

I will definately fix the width issue on my next update.

I already have been working on a new color sceme but have not come to any decision and yes I've been working with a color wheel already. Some times whats easy on my eyes is not on anothers.

I've also started to rewrite some of the content like game descriptions and such.

I would like some feed back from others some what like yours.

Thanks again.
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Old 01-19-2007, 04:28 AM Re: Please check out my site
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Old 01-28-2007, 06:33 PM Re: Please check out my site
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Looks okay but a little bland
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