Website Review and Suggestions

**donalduck_sg** · 12-16-2006, 10:54 PM

www.furphie.com

hey guy please review and give command my website.
I have submitted to google, msn, and yahoo.
i can find it but i have to type my url address other i can't find it.

**Orodreth** · 12-17-2006, 10:12 AM

Very nice site. It's always nice to find someone who like origami too. Just a pitty it's only about origami planes.

The layout is very basic, but it's clean, and I like that. I've got only 2 things I don't like about your site (besides the fact that it's only about origami planes). Here we go:
1) Why is the spash-page redirecting me? I hate sites that do that. Either make no splashpage, or make one that doesn't redirect me like this. It breaks my browser's back button.
2) The links at the bottom of the page (Home | about us | contact us) aren't working.

**bebe123** · 12-17-2006, 10:52 AM

wow....this is original web site ..congac

**SummerHudson** · 12-17-2006, 06:20 PM

I like it!

**adrian88** · 12-17-2006, 10:23 PM

its pretty nice

if you dont mind me asking
hows adsense working for you??

-adrian

**donalduck_sg** · 12-18-2006, 12:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adrian88

its pretty nice

if you dont mind me asking
hows adsense working for you??

-adrian

Tell you the truth, i don't earn $0.01 per day. Don't know what wrong. So disappointing

**jenyfari** · 12-18-2006, 09:43 PM

You need to add some content to your site and in that content add some keywords that relate to origami. It will be hard for search engines to know what your site is about without good content and related keywords. On each of your pages you should add about 300 words at least about the subject. Maybe add step by step instructions in addition to the visual steps.

At the very least you should add content to your home page. Maybe a short intro about what the site is about. Although that might seem obvious it is a good way of getting some content on the page.

And your Google ads are hidden away.

If it were my site I would have a section up the top of each page with about 300-400 words of content and to the left or right of that content I would put some Google ads. I would also have a H1 title at the top of each page describing what the page is about. Then below all of that would be the visual instructions that you already have on each page.