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It's not terrible. I like the clean navigation. You did a good job organizing into quick easy links.
I would question why you have some of your text on the right in graphic form if they are of simple fonts? Perhaps this was to add the water droplet effect.
Personally, I think it's distracting, though I understand your desire to give the page some more pizazz. Flash can be a great tool for that, but subtle is usually much better than distracting animations.
Also, I noticed you had a text link "ask us about our free consultations..." that is a bit difficult to click. This is probably because you put a getURL on the text, or just added a link to that text. What ends up happening is, you have to click on an exact letter for the hand to pop up.
You can avoid this by creating another layer in flash and put a movie clip with just a solid shape in it, right on top of the text you want to make clickable. Then put an OnClick on this new movie clip, and set it's alpha all the way to 0.
Another tip has to do with your use of lines, separating the content. You can separate content in many different ways, you do not have to explicitly use a line or border to do that.
In fact, the clean "white space" around letters can serve as a perfect border that separates different content around a layout. Look at some magazines for examples of this.
Good luck.
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