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The design is fine, don't listen to that. Too many people think that you have to go with whatever the current trend is. And trust me, it doesn't look like a first generation site. Early, yes. But not 1st generation.
When you reference another page on your site, like you do in the first paragraph of the last section, link to it. It makes things easier for the visitor, who now wouldn't have to go hunt for the link.
I went to your intro page, and there's no way to get off of it besides the Back function in the browser. You might want to change that, even if it's just making the image a link to the home page. That's what I expected it to be.
Site's are never finished, so forget about that part. I'd change it to say something like 'Look for more to come.' Just something about how more things will be added. Once you have the site to a functioning level, it's finished. After that it's improved.
Get a little bit more space between your footer and the end of the text. And probably some space undr the footer too. It just looks better that way.
Put more pictures in there like you have on the 'Location' page. All that text just doesn't look as good, and for some reason people will read the same amount of text if it has images and not complain about it.
While we're talking about the location page, just display the whole map at once. There's no reason to put it in a frame. Especially since it doesn't need much more space anyway. It's fine if you have that paragraph further down, because people going to that page will be most interested in where to get coffee.
Make the hours box stand out more. And don't say that it's never open on Sunday, that's just weird. Instead, use 'closed' or something similar. In the future, the place might be open on Sunday. You never know.
I really like it though.
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