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Old 12-21-2006, 02:49 PM Constructive Critism Please
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The website is still under development. Alot of the content will be duplicated or just missing completely. I am just looking for layout and style critique. Also if anyone has opera installed can you tell me if everything displays properly? Thank you in advance for your time, it is much appreciated.

http://jenn.cnotecreations.com

Update: spelled criticism wrong, man do i feel stupid lmao.

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Old 12-21-2006, 05:30 PM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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hi there.. your site looks good but you might want to check it out on Firefox. the navigation is all on top while the content is below it...

looks good on IE though.. must be just some sort of incompatibilities between the codes.
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Old 12-21-2006, 06:43 PM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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Looks fine but better check out with other browser. In my Mozilla it's fragmented.
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Old 12-21-2006, 08:42 PM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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I see what vinxxv is talkin about and I'm using IE - I'm running 1024x768 and just happened to not have my browser maximized, and the content was below the left-hand menu bar. You'll definitely want to get that sorted.

I'm liking the color scheme though, but I have mixed feelings on that purple star. You pretty much already warned us about the content, but I think you might want to run that content by a spell-checker. I didn't look through the whole thing, but two sentences in, you have "...can see from th attached..." -- missing an 'e' somewhere in there.

Another suggestion - you have a link to your e-mail address on your menu bar, but when a user clicks it, it takes them to your contact form. I think I would either make that a "mailto:" link so people can actually use your e-mail, or replace it with a "contact me" link.

I would recommend the latter, and put your e-mail address (with a proper "mailto:" link) somewhere in your contact form page, and give people the option.

I would use center-alignment sparingly - I think some of the other folks on this forum will back me up on this one... Using it in important content-rich areas like what you're doing, is not viewed as very professional. Maybe just center your headings and left-justify the rest. Trust me it'll read a lot better.

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Old 12-21-2006, 10:04 PM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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again firefox it is just distored. menu is at top, no content seen, have to scroll.
looks fine in safari.

i would add some roll overs to the navigation tho. a bit plane at the moment, it just get s the user involved, and they feel a little be more interactive with the site.
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Old 12-22-2006, 01:42 AM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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Even thought Firefox shifted it, it still does look OK.
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Old 12-22-2006, 05:16 PM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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The website is still under development. Alot of the content will be duplicated or just missing completely. I am just looking for layout and style critique. Also if anyone has opera installed can you tell me if everything displays properly? Thank you in advance for your time, it is much appreciated.

http://jenn.cnotecreations.com

Update: spelled criticism wrong, man do i feel stupid lmao.
While I like the colors it makes reading the text VERY hard. Nothing beats the contrast of black text on white background. It's possible to keep your background that color but create a table where your main text is and have its background be white or off white so you can have black text.
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Old 12-22-2006, 07:07 PM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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I have to agree with cdonnell. The text can be a little hard to read and after a while it becomes a strain on the eyes.

Otherwise a nice looking site.
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Old 12-23-2006, 06:41 AM Re: Constructive Critism Please
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The bold header text could really use some help. Everything else looks great!
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