1st one was a good basic page. You really need a better picture for the store though. If the picture is dull it makes the website, and store seem dull.
Take the time to get better ones and it would be great. I suggest getting some white in the picture.
2nd. Simple and cool. I like how it loads smoothly a little at a time. I didn't mind waiting for it to load for this reason a nice plus. I like how it has a cool feel too. and great pictures on the intro page.
I am no expert just my personal opingons
Take Care
