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Old 01-05-2007, 09:26 AM Oh my
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Ive just had another site dumped on me and I have recently made it dynamic. If some of you would please give it the once over and slate or praise it to your hearts content I would be much obliged.

http://www.bespokecc.co.uk

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Old 01-05-2007, 12:21 PM Re: Oh my
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It's a nicely done site -- only 2 things I would recommend...

1. Clean up the NavMenu by making 2 - 3 description names; when they run into 2 lines, it looks amateurish.

2. You only have 2 coding errors:

line 80 column 5 - Warning: <img> attribute value "Welcome to the Bespoke Group" must be lower case for XHTML
line 80 column 5 - Warning: <img> attribute "align" has invalid value "welcome to the bespoke group"
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Old 01-05-2007, 12:32 PM Re: Oh my
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I think the "B" in the logo should be outlined in white..
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Old 01-05-2007, 02:36 PM Re: Oh my
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Aside from what was already suggested you should fix.

Keywords:This tag contains too many characters.
This tag contains 640 characters. This is too many for what we would consider a 'robot friendly' web page. The maximum number of characters we recommend for this tag is 500.
Keyword relevancy to page content is terrible. However, this is not necessarily bad if you have a lot of content. The most important factor is to have your keywords on the page a few times.
The keywords relevancy to page content is 21%.
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Old 01-05-2007, 02:39 PM Re: Oh my
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Aside from what was already suggested you should fix.

Keywords:This tag contains too many characters.
This tag contains 640 characters. This is too many for what we would consider a 'robot friendly' web page. The maximum number of characters we recommend for this tag is 500.
Keyword relevancy to page content is terrible. However, this is not necessarily bad if you have a lot of content. The most important factor is to have your keywords on the page a few times.
The keywords relevancy to page content is 21%.
Don't know how long you've been doing websites, but I wouldn't place too much emphasis on what "SubmitExpress" say's about websites.
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Old 01-05-2007, 02:57 PM Re: Oh my
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I have tested many systems out and submitexspress works quite well. It got me top postions. It can for anyone to.
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Old 01-05-2007, 03:09 PM Re: Oh my
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I have tested many systems out and submitexspress works quite well. It got me top postions. It can for anyone to.
Well -- apparently, you don't know as much as you let on regarding SEO and/or Web Design ... so, let's take a look at your 3 listed sites:

The SEO Kit

You've got 69 code warnings...

Code:
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> attribute "don't" lacks value
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> attribute with missing trailing quote mark
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> attribute with missing trailing quote mark
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> attribute "kit," lacks value
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> attribute with missing trailing quote mark
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> dropping value "NULL" for repeated attribute "for"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> dropping value "NULL" for repeated attribute "for"
line 18 column 192 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&docId"
line 18 column 296 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&docId"
line 18 column 400 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&docId"
line 18 column 504 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&docId"
line 18 column 608 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&catId"
line 18 column 712 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&catId"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "be"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "fooled"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "at"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "the"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "bottom"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "of"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "our"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "page"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "insight"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "on"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "all"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "things"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "related"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "to"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "search"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "engine"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "optimization."
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "if"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "you"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "are"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "looking"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "low"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "cost"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "solutions"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "to"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "boost"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "your"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "page"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "please"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "check"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "out"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "our"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "boost"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "it"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "up"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "it"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "is"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "also"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "at"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "the"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "bottom"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "of"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "our"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "page."
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "thank"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "you"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "once"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "again"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "for"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "choosing"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "us"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "as"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "your"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "trusted"
line 7 column 1 - Warning: <meta> proprietary attribute "seo"
line 101 column 12 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
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Old 01-05-2007, 03:11 PM Re: Oh my
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You've got 68 code warnings...

Code:
line 99 column 1 - Warning: <br> element not empty or not closed
line 144 column 1 - Warning: <br> element not empty or not closed
line 147 column 1 - Warning: missing </font> before <p>
line 148 column 19 - Warning: inserting implicit <font>
line 148 column 19 - Warning: missing </font> before <p>
line 148 column 19 - Warning: missing </font> before <p>
line 149 column 50 - Warning: inserting implicit <font>
line 149 column 50 - Warning: inserting implicit <font>
line 171 column 1 - Warning: discarding unexpected </font>
line 171 column 8 - Warning: replacing <p> by <br>
line 171 column 8 - Warning: inserting implicit <br>
line 171 column 8 - Warning: <br> element not empty or not closed
line 177 column 1 - Warning: discarding unexpected </font>
line 409 column 2 - Warning: missing <td>
line 419 column 7 - Warning: discarding unexpected </td>
line 193 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 211 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 229 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 247 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 265 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 283 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 301 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 319 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 337 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 355 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 373 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 391 column 2 - Warning: <td> attribute "width" has invalid value "33.3333333333%"
line 147 column 1 - Warning: trimming empty <font>
line 152 column 100 - Warning: trimming empty <font>
line 152 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 153 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 154 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 157 column 100 - Warning: trimming empty <font>
line 157 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 158 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 159 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 162 column 100 - Warning: trimming empty <font>
line 162 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 163 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 164 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 165 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 166 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 167 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 168 column 50 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 185 column 1 - Warning: trimming empty <noscript>
line 203 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 206 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 221 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 224 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 239 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 242 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 257 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 260 column 35 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 275 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 278 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 293 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 296 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 311 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 314 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 329 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 332 column 35 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 347 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 365 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 368 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 383 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 386 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 401 column 2 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
line 404 column 34 - Warning: trimming empty <span>
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Old 01-05-2007, 03:14 PM Re: Oh my
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You've got 15 code warnings...

Code:
line 38 column 151 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&productId"
line 47 column 141 - Warning: inserting implicit <font>
line 47 column 141 - Warning: replacing unexpected iframe by </iframe>
line 47 column 9 - Warning: missing </iframe>
line 94 column 151 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&productId"
line 101 column 5 - Warning: missing <td>
line 138 column 346 - Warning: replacing </p> by <br>
line 23 column 5 - Warning: <tr> proprietary attribute "height"
line 26 column 1441 - Warning: <area> lacks "href" attribute
line 29 column 5 - Warning: <tr> proprietary attribute "height"
line 47 column 9 - Warning: <iframe> attribute "align" has invalid value "middle"
line 99 column 5 - Warning: <tr> proprietary attribute "height"
line 106 column 7 - Warning: <tr> proprietary attribute "height"
line 120 column 7 - Warning: <tr> proprietary attribute "height"
line 47 column 141 - Warning: trimming empty <font>
Nope -- "SubmitExpress" doesn't show you any of your errors.
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Old 01-05-2007, 03:16 PM Re: Oh my
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Im not talking about errors. If errors really ment that much I wouldnt be listed on the top 10 results for various terms. Please do share with me your SEO report knowledge Im always eager to learn pm me any links plz.
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Old 01-05-2007, 03:23 PM Re: Oh my
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All of the professional SEO's I know, run sites that are error-free and also have "#1 SE Rankings" ... they'll tell you that errors do mean alot; especially if your site(s) don't show properly in all browsers -- IMO, anyone claiming to be an SEO needs to know many aspects about the business.

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Old 01-05-2007, 03:33 PM Re: Oh my
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I am not really concerned with being number one under search engine optimization. In fact I could care less, anybody who just starts a website doesn't say oh I need to get it optimized. They say hmm I wonder why there number 1. Then they search web dev forums for answers. That is where 85% of my business comes from. I am number 1 in several seo terms. As to the errors thing I agree, but you don't have to be perfect to get listed. I will fix up the seo site and such just so there is no arguments to that. Thank you.
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Old 01-05-2007, 07:27 PM Re: Oh my
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I am not really concerned with being number one under search engine optimization. In fact I could care less, anybody who just starts a website doesn't say oh I need to get it optimized. They say hmm I wonder why there number 1. Then they search web dev forums for answers. That is where 85% of my business comes from. I am number 1 in several seo terms. As to the errors thing I agree, but you don't have to be perfect to get listed. I will fix up the seo site and such just so there is no arguments to that. Thank you.
NP Shannon, but I do have to chuckle when you say, "I am not really concerned with being number one under search engine optimization." and this is coming from someone who claims to be an SEO Expert? Leaves me saying...hmmm!

If 85% of your business comes from "Dev Forums", I'd say you're not the SEO Expert you think you are, no matter what seo terms you use ... IMO, and those of far more highly experienced Webmasters who've been around for 10+ years, like myself, disagree with your analysis and strategy.
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Old 01-05-2007, 08:16 PM Re: Oh my
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I've been building web sites for 10+ years In the 'old days' keywords actually were king for search engines (pre-google). The fact is these days keywords are not what gets you top rankings, it's more attributable to incoming links and even Google will tell you that those are paramount to good rankings. The more incoming links you have, and RELEVANT links, the more popular your site gets 'rated' and the higher you should rank.

Good, ORIGINAL content is also a big factor. I don't waste a lot of time fretting about keywords on my sites. Sure, I use some very pointed ones, but I don't kill myself researching what words to use.

Also important, good titles, and clean, semantic markup - that means using REAL headings (h1-h6), paragraphs, etc.
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LOL LadynRed -- guess we're the "old folks" here; I've been doing websites for over 14 years ... maybe we've crossed paths in an earlier life!

Correct -- keywords (along with naming your site with no spaces between the words) won't get top rankings; but, "fresh content" is King!

I also agree with you on REAL headings; paragraphs; etc ... good call!
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Old 01-06-2007, 10:14 AM Re: Oh my
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Travel Agent, thats not to say I couldnt be. Infact I am number one in some smaller terms. But at this point im not going to try and hash it out with the bigboys who chare 1000's to get peoples sites optomized. Sure it could be done in time but I dont feel its neccessary for my business. Thank you for your concern though and I will keep it in mind.
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Old 01-08-2007, 05:05 AM Re: Oh my
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Chaps,

Thanks very much for your time and your comments. Ive got it within my goals for this upcoming google update so this time next month (fingers crossed) I may start to see some google changes. Ive done a little SEO in the past but I am no expert. But it looks like I have iot moving in the right direction.

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Old 01-08-2007, 08:59 AM Re: Oh my
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LOL LadynRed -- guess we're the "old folks" here; I've been doing websites for over 14 years ... maybe we've crossed paths in an earlier life!
Yes, it would appear that way.. lol. It sure is possible we've crossed paths.. you never know any more !
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Old 01-08-2007, 03:19 PM Re: Oh my
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Wow.
Visually I like it a lot, the cool colours blend in well to produce a very appealing and proffesional looking site.
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