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Old 01-25-2007, 07:39 PM Exotic Car Website
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I am rebuilding my Exotic Car site http://diabloautos.com and was wondering what you thought i should add or change in the new edition.
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Old 01-25-2007, 08:40 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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Old 01-26-2007, 05:35 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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There i fixed it my dns was down so i had to change back to url forwarding.
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Old 01-26-2007, 06:04 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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well first off, change your fonts. Plain Times New Roman font looks very unprofessional and 'lame' to be honest. Second, the banner up top is just plain text in front of a clip art car. I would suggest getting a cool image of a sweet car and then using photoshop or somehting to create some cool text.

When i clicked on the cars, it opens up into a new window. I don;t like this, nor do probably 99% of the rest of the people in the world. Just a suggestion. Good luck
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Old 01-26-2007, 09:27 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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Yes i agree that the site is dull but that aint no clip art car. It is the Buggati Eb 16.4 Veyron the worlds fastest production car. Not to mention worlds most expensive car.
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Old 01-26-2007, 11:28 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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Well someone needs to say it...
Is this a oh i know paint and basic html site?
The site looks terrible and the content looks like you copy and pasted from google.com. the site doesn't offer anything special or unique its just another car and driver knock off (or w/e the car website is).

Its a good start but its really not worth reviewing.
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Old 01-27-2007, 05:00 AM Re: Exotic Car Website
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It is a very basic website. Have you tried some of the free templates out there? There are plenty of them. Or maybe if you have some spare change buy the ezgenerator.com software. I think it costs $99 but it is well worth the investment as you can create more than one website with it. It has hundreds of really professional templates and it has a host of really great features to help you build a website including the ability to add a blog.

Not sure what the tech savvy SEO's would have to say about the free templates and the like but I have no html experience and I need something that will build a website for me. I use ezgenerator for quite a few of my websites.
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Old 01-27-2007, 10:38 AM Re: Exotic Car Website
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I see a lot of content that is not even yours, it's links to OTHER sites' information.
You also have a major spelling and grammar problem. If English isn't your native tongue, find someone who is English-speaking and ask them for some help.
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Old 01-27-2007, 12:00 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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all the content is ours. The only external links are going to the maker of the cars website. Like Ferrari cars reviews have a link to Ferrari's website that's all those link are for.
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Old 01-27-2007, 08:55 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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* not a nice design
* you need to work at the css [if you have one] and at the images
* i can see the 404 error there - that's not good !
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Old 01-28-2007, 04:56 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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I agree with most all here. The site doesn't look professional. Create a logo first that looks good.
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Old 01-28-2007, 06:28 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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looks okay a bit bland
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Old 01-28-2007, 06:29 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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I agree, this looks like one of the first sites I tried to build using Mozilla Composer. Try to manipulate your graphics a little more, but the appearance of your web page is the first thing your visitor notices, and this web page doesn't have much to interest anybody.
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Old 01-28-2007, 11:20 PM Re: Exotic Car Website
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I didn't like the look and feel of the site. Really need to work on css and designing. My suggestion is hire a professional to do your work, your work doesn't seems to be professional enough.

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Old 01-29-2007, 06:15 AM Re: Exotic Car Website
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Honestly, this is an amatuer site and therefore I would grade it on an amatuer scale. As most can tell it is pretty clear you are new to website/graphic design. My advice to you would be to look for some tutorials on site design, etc.

Even now as a designer I go out to template websites and I look through templates and see some of the popular techniques used. Sometimes I even try to recreate them. If you do not have photoshop, it would be a great tool to invest in (I do not condone warez ever, yes I know these programs are expensive, but vital tools to any graphic designer)
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