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Ok, I will start at the top of the page and work my way down. The first thing I notice is your logo, and it is not very flashy, but seems to get the point across. I would probably work on this a bit to see if I could get it more professional looking.
Moving down, I see your navigation buttons which are incredibly hard to read. The font is wrong, and the red is wrong. It might be ok if it were a solid red, but that outline red is very difficult to see. Then you have Arcade in a rainbow. Try making that solid also, that will help there.
Next, I see your D.E.N.S.A. OUTPOST 49 graphic. I like this, I like the fuzzy look and feel of it. Try to incorporate that into your header though. Rather than having this by itself, incorporate it in your new header.
Next, I look at your left navigation. Switch the spot around. Rather than having affiliates on top, put your links there, and the affiliates below that.
I like the shoutbox, but it is kind of out of place on this site. You either need to dull it down, or spice up the rest of the site to match it.
Last thing I would do is shorten this homepage. It is incredibly long with nothing down the left or right hand sides past the very top. Try moving a bunch of those stories into the archives section. Also, try putting your email me link under links instead of clear at the bottom of the page. If I need to contact you I would much rather stay at the top of the page rather than having to scroll all the way down to find your contact us link.
This site has potential though. Good luck with it.
6 out of 10
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