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Old 02-28-2007, 06:21 AM try my site - be critical!
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Can you guys have a look at my new site at
www.frostconservatories.co.uk
it is flash based but i wanted to see what you all think about the content.
Thanks (and I have thick skin so go for the jugular!)
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Old 02-28-2007, 06:46 AM Re: try my site - be critical!
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I like the design of this site.

I think that the content is good, but it's a little wordy in places. I would advise that you summarise parts of the text into bullet points or something, just to reduce the amount of text.

Good luck!
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Old 02-28-2007, 06:53 AM Re: try my site - be critical!
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It's really nice.
I would maybe slower the time changes, and make the text lighter when night comes before it's getting hard to read and confusing.

It's just a detail. It's a good job.
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Old 02-28-2007, 08:35 AM Re: try my site - be critical!
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Site looks nice and clean, maybe take closer look at flash content, and related problems with IE.
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Old 02-28-2007, 12:14 PM Re: try my site - be critical!
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It's indeed too dark when the light changes.
It's also weird that it does change on the first and second but not on he other pages. This is most noticeable on the last page.
The design looks very neat but I can't say anything about the content.

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Old 02-28-2007, 02:27 PM Re: try my site - be critical!
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I'd be critical but...well...there's nothing for me to be critical of.

I'm on a machine running IE7 with Flash Player 9 installed, and all I see is the Frost logo, a house that has the bottom left corner of the image cut off, and a changing background.

I don't see text, other images, anything.
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Old 02-28-2007, 03:12 PM Re: try my site - be critical!
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My 1st critical statement is, you have a Flash site and I won't look at it -- why do so many continue creating flash sites, when the SE's can't read flash?

Makes no sense to me ...pounding head on keyboard...
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Old 03-01-2007, 09:55 AM Re: try my site - be critical!
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Intro page, about us and contact all use the same image. I suggest switching out that image for each section.

I like the layout, very well organized, contemporary and clean.

one more suggestion: you need a title on the home page, something that calls out that this is a glass-observatory contractor. Honestly, i thought i was just looking at another house contractor, but being that this is a niche field, i think you need some sort of headline on that first page to let everyone know what they're looking at.
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Old 03-01-2007, 09:56 PM Re: try my site - be critical!
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The color changing background on the about page makes it hard to read. It looks really good other then that.
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Old 03-02-2007, 05:28 PM Re: try my site - be critical!
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Hi i like it very neat good job
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Old 03-02-2007, 06:07 PM Re: try my site - be critical!
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Very nice

Only one thought.. add a link to a 'non-flash' website.
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Old 03-04-2007, 02:22 PM Re: try my site - be critical!
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Looks good. The navigation is actually functional. A lot of flash sites suffer there.
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Old 03-05-2007, 02:21 AM Re: try my site - be critical!
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Site looks nice, but from a search marketing perspective i would definitely add divs containing your text, in a google-friendly manner.

Check out http://www.jehochman.com/articles/se...ly-flash.shtml for some advice
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Old 03-05-2007, 02:27 AM Re: try my site - be critical!
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it looks like really attractive i like it
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Old 03-05-2007, 03:44 AM Re: try my site - be critical!
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Good job, clean and easy to navigate.
The picture of the house looks very low resolution as well as the frost logo; on my screen anyway. (very pixelated)
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