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Old 03-16-2007, 10:17 AM My frist site what do you think?
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Thanks for looking. I am new at this so please give me any and all suggestions.

www.amnicodirect.com

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Old 03-16-2007, 10:38 AM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Certainly not bad for a first attempt!

I would reccomend that in future you abandon the table structure for <div> tags. It only took me a couple of days to learn how to make a website fully out of <div> tags so it is worth doing.

Other than that, there are certainly mistakes and improvements to be made, but you will learn them on your own soon enough through making more sites.

A very impressive first attempt - well done
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Old 03-16-2007, 10:53 AM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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i likie clean design. i'd add description for each category. it will help decide your users if they need your product. when i landed at the home page i thought that you were selling toys. may be it is just me but you should make clear message about the goal of your site.
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Old 03-16-2007, 06:13 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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one thing i would do is change the color of the links on the footer to something other than blue... maybe a light green or white...
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Old 03-16-2007, 07:51 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Too many code warnings to show, but you really should correct these:

Code:
line 10 column 1 - Warning: discarding unexpected <html>
line 11 column 1 - Warning: discarding unexpected <head>
line 9 column 7 - Warning: <title> isn't allowed in <td> elements
line 9 column 7 - Warning: <meta> isn't allowed in <td> elements
line 16 column 1 - Warning: discarding unexpected <body>
line 48 column 44 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&ID"
line 50 column 44 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&ID"
line 52 column 49 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&Page"
line 54 column 49 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&Page"
line 93 column 1 - Warning: <form> isn't allowed in <table> elements
line 94 column 3 - Warning: missing </form> before <tr>
line 95 column 5 - Warning: inserting implicit <table>
line 99 column 81 - Warning: discarding unexpected </button>
line 106 column 3 - Error: discarding unexpected </form>
line 94 column 3 - Warning: missing </form>
line 110 column 1 - Error: discarding unexpected </td>
line 111 column 1 - Error: discarding unexpected </tr>
line 121 column 3 - Warning: <form> isn't allowed in <table> elements
line 122 column 2 - Warning: missing </form> before <tr>
line 124 column 50 - Warning: inserting implicit <table>
line 127 column 62 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&HS"
line 129 column 123 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&HS"
line 143 column 21 - Error: discarding unexpected </form>
line 144 column 3 - Warning: <form> isn't allowed in <table> elements
line 145 column 2 - Warning: <form> shouldn't be nested
line 145 column 2 - Warning: missing </form> before <tr>
line 147 column 50 - Warning: inserting implicit <table>
line 150 column 62 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&HS"
line 152 column 123 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&HS"
line 169 column 21 - Error: discarding unexpected </form>
line 170 column 3 - Warning: <form> isn't allowed in <table> elements
line 171 column 2 - Warning: <form> shouldn't be nested
line 171 column 2 - Warning: missing </form> before <tr>
line 173 column 50 - Warning: inserting implicit <table>
line 176 column 62 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&HS"
line 178 column 123 - Warning: unescaped & or unknown entity "&HS"
line 195 column 21 - Error: discarding unexpected </form>
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Old 03-16-2007, 09:05 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Thanks for help. The only problem is that i do not know how to fix the errors. Can anyone help?
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Old 03-16-2007, 09:12 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Angelosanto I would reccomend that in future you abandon the table structure for <div> tags. It only took me a couple of days to learn how to make a website fully out of <div> tags so it is worth doing.
Do you have a good site to learn from?
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Old 03-16-2007, 10:09 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Sczzy,

All your product listing structure looks like "ads by google".

Better Make a box, put products in white bg and product header in light bg. some thing border and lots of padding between products. Also maintain consistent thumbnail size
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Old 03-16-2007, 10:24 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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All your product listing structure looks like "ads by google".
Google is #1. Is that bad?
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Old 03-16-2007, 10:48 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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good design.
underlying code is disgusting.... learn some css my friend
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Old 03-16-2007, 10:48 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Google is #1. Is that bad?
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people aren't gonna think ur website is real if all the products listed on it look like if their advertisements from google....

it looks like one of those domain placeholders... where all the things are advertisement links
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:02 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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people aren't gonna think ur website is real if all the products listed on it look like if their advertisements from google....

it looks like one of those domain placeholders... where all the things are advertisement links
I still don’t understand Google is #1 what is the problem?
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:10 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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I still don’t understand Google is #1 what is the problem?
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if ur product listing looks like an advertisement... people are going to think the site is fake

by the way no one is disputing that Google isn't #1
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:15 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Are the pic the only thing that is making it look fake(like an advertisement)?
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:17 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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the text is structured too much like one of them google ads.. that's the problem...
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:22 PM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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I get what your saying.
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Old 03-17-2007, 12:28 AM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Oh. atlast you got my point. Thanks Jyoz for explaining my point.
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Old 03-17-2007, 07:06 AM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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I have to agree with Jyoz .. it's exactly what my first thought was. I would suggest to split the products into 2 columns and then place each one in a cell (even if you don't want to add the lines, some spacing should do)
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Old 03-17-2007, 09:21 AM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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Thank you all for your suggestions. I will do what I can to make it look like a store and not a search engine.
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Old 03-17-2007, 09:29 AM Re: My frist site what do you think?
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content is good but I forgot it once I left. what are you doing to make people remember it?
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