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Old 04-20-2007, 10:30 AM Review my new site, please...
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Dear All Member,

I was created new site http://www.catper.org and I need your review, please give me some feedback related my new site. Thanks before for your time...

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Old 04-22-2007, 06:21 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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Man, thats confusing. You have tons of links along with loads of adsence so i don't even know what i'm clicking on. I think for each of the catergories add something iconic, just to make them stand out a bit more.
You also need a splash of colour, at the moment, it looks like one of those not so rememberable sites.

.Best of Luck, PM me if you need more info.
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Old 04-22-2007, 09:06 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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Your site has a bunch of information
I feel it would be better if you categorize them and add colors according to it
Simply white refers to less attractive, so use some colorful shades for background
Insert a logo
and also place the title in the top middle on main webpage

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Old 04-22-2007, 09:21 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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You need a new logo make it web 2.0 and you need a better layout.!
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Old 04-23-2007, 01:52 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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There's nothing "new" about your site -- it's just another re-furbished Article Dashboard.
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Old 04-23-2007, 10:15 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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you really need some work on layout, colors and to categorize you links ... does search option work on the site?
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Old 04-23-2007, 10:23 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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its dull & colorless
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Old 04-23-2007, 11:39 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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while i'm thinking, how about a links cloud if you wanna go web 2.0
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Old 04-24-2007, 03:57 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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dear all, thank you very much for feedback it's really useful for me, i love you guys, for more suggestion is welcome, thanks
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Old 04-24-2007, 04:13 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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Honestly, your site looks boring
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Old 04-24-2007, 06:24 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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realli a gud website; caters the needs of the users wel the color scheme is nice, still u can shape it better

gud luck
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Old 04-26-2007, 08:40 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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hi bruce and christ, thanks for your useful feedback, always success for us...
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Old 04-26-2007, 01:53 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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The end of the first paragraph after "Authors" needs a period.

The sentence "The place to submit articles, find reprint articles for your web site or ezine content about internet." is really awkward. If leaves me thinking about internet what? You need to finish the sentence or add a "the" in front of internet.

The place to submit articles & find reprint articles for your web site or ezine.

Would work much better.

I have to agree with the other comments though. The site is boring and needs some graphics or colors or something.

Good luck with the site! I hope it works for you.
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Old 05-02-2007, 06:18 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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hi loganeast, thanks for your feedback, but my site is only for internet articles related not general, thanks for your suggestion and i still develop this... thanks again...
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Old 05-02-2007, 07:32 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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It looks like tons of other article directories out there i'm afraid
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Old 05-02-2007, 12:37 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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hi loganeast, thanks for your feedback, but my site is only for internet articles related not general
I don't think you understood what I meant. I was simply saying that grammatically, the sentence needed to be changed. The way the sentence is phrased it doesn't make sense. The grammar is awkward.

I would suggest changing the sentence to: "The place to submit articles & find reprint articles for your web site or ezine related to the internet."

By adding the definite article "the" in front of "internet" it makes the sentence grammatically proper. It is not proper English grammar to say "related to internet." I was just trying to correct your grammar.

Correct grammar and spelling goes a LONG way to making your site look professional.

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Old 05-02-2007, 01:50 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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more color and its just to much (cluttered)
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Old 05-02-2007, 10:45 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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layout is bland and the categorization is too used.

the problems you are going to face with your venture, is there are thousands if not millions of article sites. why should i read from your site, what makes you different.

another problem you face is your advertising. almost every decent adwords and ypn user does a daily search of any and all article sites and blocks them from their campaigns. i know i just did, sorry.

if a content source is your passion i commend you and wish you luck. if you are looking for a quick buck because you saw a "i made a million dollars off of adsense", i feel sorry for you, cause you are one of another 25 million people who read the same thing, and are trying the same thing.

ust my 2 pennies
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Old 05-03-2007, 10:12 PM Re: Review my new site, please...
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Hi,

Yeah, I agree with a lot of the other posts. There is too much information and the font size and style only makes it harder to read. Some color should be used to make important information stand out more. Good Luck!
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Old 05-04-2007, 04:59 AM Re: Review my new site, please...
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look ok to me.. except if you want a bit of graphics..
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