Overall I liked it (but I seem to like every site. I'm the Paula Abdul of this board. - Not a good thing to be, BTW.)
I think jameslow is right about the Web Design Company bar at the top. It just seems unnecessary.
It is very busy, you might consider condensing a couple things. I really like the large graphic at the top, but its very large. Could you achieve the same effect with a smaller graphic?
I'm really not a fan of the scrolling testimonials. I think its unnecessary. You could get by just as easily with a single testimonial that changes randomly everytime you go to the page.
In the "Choose Miracle Studios and here's what you'll receive..." section. You wrote:
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3++ theme related designs to choose from!
FREE Search Engine Optimization of your pages!
FREE unnumberable changes to your website!
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What does 3++ mean? Is that over 300? And "unnumerable" is a very akward word. It would be more powerful (and less vague) to say unlimited.
Both are dangerous to me as you will be making changes to this client's web site for the rest of your business life. I don't suggest that. How about unlimited changes for a year or 6 months? Give yourself an out. You don't want to be tied down to an annoying customer forever because you wanted to get a sale now. I've been down that road a couple times and I have regretted each one!
Overall, I think its a really nice, impressive web site. You should get plenty of work from it.
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