Website Review and Suggestions

**ehingerenterpri** · 04-24-2007, 12:31 PM

I have just finished page 2 of my new site that I will be launching on saturday. Please give me opinions, comments, and critisims so I can make the necessary changes and finish my site for Saturday.

Thanks.

http://www.ehingerenterprises.info/a...marketing2.htm

Benjamin

**template** · 04-24-2007, 02:07 PM

amator

**ehingerenterpri** · 04-24-2007, 02:32 PM

so what is amator suppose to mean becuase if you are calling me an
Amateur
you need to learn to spell and maybe you ought to think about who the
Amateur
really is.

**Nano** · 04-24-2007, 03:24 PM

Spice your website up. Add some images. Be carefull with too much text on an opening page. Focus your goal on making people clicking further into your site.

**Minfoman** · 04-24-2007, 05:03 PM

It is visually uninteresting, but then again most SEO marketing sites are. I don't want to badmouth your site, but I'm getting a little sick of get rich quick SEO sites. I've been looking at these types of sites for a month now and find that there is little actual knowledge to gain. Regardless, Good luck in your business venture.

**vkw91** · 04-24-2007, 05:49 PM

Where's the colour?, the life?, the Aethetically pleasing bit?!?!
As Minfoman said, most SEO marking sites are basically boring, so make yours different.

You need to make people intrested in reading your site. TBH, i just wanted to click off it because i don't like reading much to find out what its all about. Add a header; a proper menu (whats up with SEO marketing sites and wierd navigation) but most importantly images and colour. Use images to illustrate your point, and colour; just to create a strong image for your site.

**seolman** · 04-24-2007, 06:53 PM

You definitely need to get some color in this site... images, eye-candy. When a user arrives at your site you only have a few seconds to get their attention. Organize images or illustrations to compliment the text. Lead the visitor where you want them to go. You've already moved in the right direction by getting your site reviewed here.

**travelagent** · 04-24-2007, 07:47 PM

Anybody who puts up a "get-rich-quick" site like this, and claims he "allegedly" makes over $4,000 a month with his money-making scheme about writing articles, has only posted here to SPAM the forum.

Then, you claim it's "100% Free" -- anyone who makes the claims you do, automatically raises a red flag with many intelligent people -- do you see STUPID tattoed on my forehead?

After back-hacking your URL, you didn't bother telling people about your main site -- I wonder why not...

Then, look at all of the crap Google has on you ... IMO; I see this as nothing short of a SPAM POST.