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As far as content, I notice the normal little grammar problems here and there. There isn't the same as their isn't the same as they're. It's is not equal to its. Those type of things. There is also some issue with punctuation. It looks good overall.
As far as appearance. Yes, please breakup the entries somehow, be it a box or a bar.
In Firefox (with adblocker on) there appears to be a large amount of whitespace to the left of the vertical blue area. It could be where your ads would normally appear but it could also be a rendering error.
Good luck
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