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Old 06-25-2007, 10:40 AM Please review my site :)
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Old 06-25-2007, 11:28 AM Re: Please review my site :)
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Not bad, but for some reason, everything on your site loaded too slowly. When you rollover the tabs, the font changes, too. I'd keep it the same font, but if that was intentional, then so be it. Also, on the Support page, spell out the word "Please", saying "Plz" looks WAY too unprofessional. On the Contact page, the font changed to Times. Make sure to change it back to Verdana or Arial or whatever you're using on the rest of your site. Finally, I'd have somebody look over the text; it appears as if English is your second language, which is fine, but I think it could be made a little bit more coherent. All in all, it looks really good, just a little more work until I'd say it's ready. Nice job!
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Old 06-25-2007, 05:16 PM Re: Please review my site :)
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I agree with anwipr with everything, except that the site didn't load too slowly for me.

To be honest with you, if you want to sell web design services your site must look excellent. Your site looks ok, not good or excellent in my opinion.

You should remove the background image, it looks very unprofessional. You should also think about using another color in addition to red, everything is just way too red, at least for my taste.
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Old 06-26-2007, 02:10 AM Re: Please review my site :)
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Not bad, but for some reason, everything on your site loaded too slowly. When you rollover the tabs, the font changes, too. I'd keep it the same font, but if that was intentional, then so be it. Also, on the Support page, spell out the word "Please", saying "Plz" looks WAY too unprofessional. On the Contact page, the font changed to Times. Make sure to change it back to Verdana or Arial or whatever you're using on the rest of your site. Finally, I'd have somebody look over the text; it appears as if English is your second language, which is fine, but I think it could be made a little bit more coherent. All in all, it looks really good, just a little more work until I'd say it's ready. Nice job!
Thx for so good suggestions,I had changed support page.

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Old 06-26-2007, 02:20 AM Re: Please review my site :)
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I agree with anwipr with everything, except that the site didn't load too slowly for me.

To be honest with you, if you want to sell web design services your site must look excellent. Your site looks ok, not good or excellent in my opinion.

You should remove the background image, it looks very unprofessional. You should also think about using another color in addition to red, everything is just way too red, at least for my taste.
I am so happy to site didn't load too slowly for you.

And I choose black and red color as my site color.

With regard to your advise,i want to know other person 's ideas.

Again thanks for your good reviews.
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Old 06-26-2007, 08:21 AM Re: Please review my site :)
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Yeah I think you could do with removing the background image. Maybe do something with the table aswell so that the image doesn't cut off so sharply.

You could try setting the width to 100% so that it take up the full width of the browser, align everything to the left and set the width of the content as about 720 pixels. [This could turn out nasty, I can't really visualize it properly!]

Or maybe adding some sort of bevel/gradient effect down the side edges of the background images, again, so that the edges aren't so sharp.
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Old 06-26-2007, 03:45 PM Re: Please review my site :)
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hmm... where do you host your site? it takes ages to load... i gave up after waiting for 1 full minute.....
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Old 06-26-2007, 09:15 PM Re: Please review my site :)
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Not bad. I think there is somethings you could change. Nice site overall, though.
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Old 06-30-2007, 12:08 AM Re: Please review my site :)
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hmm... where do you host your site? it takes ages to load... i gave up after waiting for 1 full minute.....
I host my site in china. 1 minute is so long time.if i were you,i would can't wait also.

please ,where are you locate now?
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Old 07-01-2007, 02:04 AM Re: Please review my site :)
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I think the design is "alright". The logo definitely isn't impressive, and the navigation text is very blurry.

You should also set a border around the width of your design to make it stand out from the background.
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Old 07-03-2007, 09:20 PM Re: Please review my site :)
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Thx for your kind-heart review.

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I think the design is "alright". The logo definitely isn't impressive, and the navigation text is very blurry.

You should also set a border around the width of your design to make it stand out from the background.
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Old 07-03-2007, 09:43 PM Re: Please review my site :)
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Looks ok. I would actually use a really neat design as a logo at the top to promote what the site is.
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Old 07-04-2007, 12:43 PM Re: Please review my site :)
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I think it doesn't look like a professional graphic design website - especially the opening page, which is plain too much text - the opening page should feature some of the great stuff from your portfolio - also your logo needs to be stepped up a notch and be larger
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