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The first word that comes to mind is cluttered.
I also don't like the scrolling div that you have added. Personally, I do not like seeing a scrolling div disabling me from being able to view more content at a single time, nor do I think it's pertinent to use when you're trying to showcase a portfolio even if it is used to display news/updates.
The contrast between your font color and background makes my eyes burn, and the room is pretty dim right now. I'm not also a big fan of dark colors either, so that's adding to it.
I just don't think those colors really suit your portfolio. It's dark, dreary, and depressing when I look at it. I think more of a gore filled video game then I do a designer.
Also, get rid of the image map. Slice the images, and create an un-ordered list to display your main navigation. You can then use css to stylize it (eg: displaying them inline as well as giving the background of the image you've sliced.) This leads to better accessibility.
I'm exhausted otherwise I'd critique it so more. It's a good start, but there's definite room for improvement.
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