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WFL Launches in style
Old 05-17-2004, 01:29 AM WFL Launches in style
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Hey everyone, after months of work, Whiteley For Life has finally launched. http://www.whiteleyforlife.com

please let me know what you think
I'm sure many will get a kick out of some of the articles
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Well, first, I own a software resale company, and I have never heard of the title. That aside, the site is pretty basic and plain. Down the left side of this layout the graphics are funny. It is like your background for the table is not big enough so it begins to show again from the beginning. The only problem is that is the beginning. That straight line down the left side and the rounded border of the table below do not mix.

There is very little actual information on this site. I think you are trying to show off the title, but there is no information about it. No ESRB, no prices, no where to buy, nothing. I would definately work on that, and maybe get a few distributors to actually sell the title. Other than that, it is a pretty poor site, there is just too much to go over here. I recommend scrapping the majority of it, and beginning a new template.

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Old 05-18-2004, 10:02 AM
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thanks for the reply. The site is not completely finished so there is more to come including a film section for the monkey crusades coming early this summer. So i hope you check back and see what that is all about.

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Old 05-18-2004, 10:27 AM
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I agree with what was already said. The site is poorly designed. It doesn't fit in a 800x600 window and is even a little too large for 1024x768.

As far as marketing goes, the site does little to promote the video game, which I'm guessing is its main purpose.
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