Website Review and Suggestions

**mwosh** · 08-13-2007, 01:10 PM

Please tell me what you think of my "Coming Soon" page. This will be close to the style of the final page when it is finished. I just want to make sure the page is attractive enough to have people come back after visiting.

http://www.tervoo.com

Here is what I read about coming soon pages: The coming soon page doesn't have to be too involved, but should include a descriptive page title, a bit of content that complements your title tag, and anything else you want. Don't worry about design at this point.

Do you agree, disagree?
What should I add or take away for better google hits, and understanding of the site?

**highanddry** · 08-13-2007, 01:29 PM

Good look. Unprofessional wording. "kick ***" and beer drops are words not suitable for your demographic

**Rephrase** · 08-14-2007, 12:40 AM

I agree with highanddry. You should put some quick information in your upper banner. The "Who are your heroes" and other questions don't seem to call that much attention to me. Or try making a more colorful your banner.

**audiomad** · 08-14-2007, 05:48 AM

I like it its clean and to the point one thing tho the email sign up needs to stand out a bit more just looks like apart of the logo.

**nancy4king** · 10-03-2007, 03:09 AM

Clean, simple looking site. Your idea is clear and to the point. But the email sign up seems apart from the logo. It needs to stand out. Also you must put some information in the upper banner.