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2 weeks, Dreamweaver and an unexperienced newbie.Please rate!
Old 08-22-2007, 04:17 PM 2 weeks, Dreamweaver and an unexperienced newbie.Please rate!
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Hi everyone,
I have purchased this template and worked very hard on it. I had no idea about HTML when I started it, but I sweat blood and finally it is ready. Please review it !
http://www.thewrightcorner.com
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:03 PM Re: 2 weeks, Dreamweaver and an unexperienced newbie.Please rate!
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The block images at the bottom really stand out ... and not in a positive way. You should either stylize these to match the template, or get rid of them. I'd lean on getting rid of them; a graphic with a pediatric service doesn't help your credibility for maintaining a data center. It's not a deal breaker, either, but it isn't helping you, so think about removing it.

The graphic at the bottom of your inner pages is great. Consider having it stay along the bottom no matter where you scroll. Maybe making your home page smaller, text wise, so people see the graphic there, too...?

Under "Our clients list consist of:", don't use all caps. Again, it doesn't look professional, and it doesn't add emphasis when the whole list is capitalized.
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Old 08-22-2007, 06:49 PM Re: 2 weeks, Dreamweaver and an unexperienced newbie.Please rate!
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I'm with Forrest on both points, those graphics have to be removed or another concept is grey them out. Then add a rounded box around them and put them in a column or something. I don't know, it takes away from your bottom picture.

Your light to dark should be reversed because the light part is on the white text making it hard to read.

That bottom cityscape is great!

Good for 2 weeks in Dreamweaver and no experience.
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Old 08-23-2007, 03:49 AM Re: 2 weeks, Dreamweaver and an unexperienced newbie.Please rate!
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The header and the right corner of your site is blank. That's not good!
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Old 08-23-2007, 08:56 AM Re: 2 weeks, Dreamweaver and an unexperienced newbie.Please rate!
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If you want someone to say it's great then stop here. If you want an honest review then read on.

It's really not good. I could list the many things you need to change but I have better advice...
If this is your business and the website is the public face of it - pay a web designer to do the job for you. They will do a proper job and create a professional image for your company.

I am a web designer - if my computer breaks down I would call in a technician - not have a go myself. You are the techy guys, don't have a go at website design - it's a different skill.

Sorry to give such a negative review (especially after you have put lots of effort into it) but when it is peoples business is in question, it's best to be honest.
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Old 08-24-2007, 06:03 AM Re: 2 weeks, Dreamweaver and an unexperienced newbie.Please rate!
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you need a wider header image and bigger test font
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Old 09-10-2007, 04:21 AM Nice graphics.
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I like your site. Nice graphics. You have put in a lot of hard work. Good color scheme. Nice logo. But the header and the right corner of your site is blank.
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