The site looks really nice, Astawicki, but the intro text is very poorly done. For example, instead of "Every Wanted a Blog?" you should have "Ever want a blog?" or how about "Yearning for a blog?" or some other descriptive word or phrase to catch the attention of your visitors.
There there's this paragraph:
Quote:
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Speed, support, and quality. That's all there is here at Your--Host.info! Speed, we have state of the art technology with are servers. There here go make your personal or business be a success in the internet world of tomorrow! Support we have class A Support that is with you 100% of the time. Like are Support motto is "If it's your Problem it's are Problem" Support is are Number one thing because there are other Free hosting sites out there but they don't have support like Your--Host.info does! Quality is important to have when you have a free hosting site because if it is free it does not mean it should not be of quality. With Your--Host.info they are no hidden Fees, Free means free. The only thing we put on your site is a small banner ad at the bottom of your page, that's all.
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First, you might want to break that down into paragraphs and bold or make headers.
Something like this:
<h2>Speed, support, and quality.</h2>
That's all there is here at Your--Host.info!
<h3>Speed</h3>
We have state of the art technology with are (should be "OUR") servers. [There here go] (could be removed) then... Make your personal or business be a success in the internet world of tomorrow!
<h3>Support</h3>
We have class A Support that is with you 100% of the time. [Like are] (take out and replace with "Our") Support motto is "If it's your Problem it's are (again, change to "our") Problem". Support is are (again, change to "our") number one thing because there are other Free hosting sites out there but they don't have support like Your--Host.info does!
<h3>Quality</h3>
Quality is important to have when you have a free hosting site because if it is free it does not mean it should not be of quality. With Your--Host.info they are no hidden fees, <strong>free means free</strong>. The only thing we put on your site is a small banner ad at the bottom of your page, that's all.
I like the look a lot though -- now you've got me more curious about Joomla! I've never used it be read about it a lot.
Well, there's my 2-cents.
